Group Discussion

Yesterday me and my group discussed the narrative of our final piece. This was because it was still just a rough idea and details of the narrative hadn't been developed. We used points from the focus group to help us in developing the narrative, our audience enjoy randomness and challenged conventions.

Our initial idea included a main character breaking things, but after a long discussion, we came to the conclusion that this was too cliche, boring, & lacked any progressive narrative structure. This was also pointed out by our peers during the peer assessment. We decided to firstly add more characters to the music video, to add some variation. We will also have these characters in suits, as this will challenge convention rather than having them wear hoodies and track suits. This challenge of convention is due to our focus group feedback but we were also inspired by the Beatles, a young rebellious group of teens in suits, it worked very well for them so we will replicate that. Thirdly, we are going to make the characters wear masks, this  covers their identities and also acts as humorous. We are going to show the journey to the room that they are going into by having the characters building up pace and being more and more immature as this will interest the audience.