Today our group began our first attempt in creating a two column story board for the few couple of minutes of our music video. I think we managed this quite successfully, based on the response of our peers who understood what has happening in our shots. However they did have a few criticisms. One was that the shots of the studio equipment was unclear, and the narrative wasn't too clear either. A shot was also criticised for being at risk of being boring, they suggested maybe intercutting between shots of him walking in the field and in the studio. This feedback was very useful as we will try and develop a much clearer narrative and be more detailed in the shots.
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